OC 1 (Kotoko Shichirou)

                                    

                                              
The very first my hero academia OC review. This is so very exciting. I was so hype to see this OC and I can't wait to review him. This OC is by dame-jack  I hope you like it.
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Name: Kotoko Shichirou (Last name being family name, first name not really having a meaning other than being named after my friend)
                          
This is a cool name, also like how you put his last name 

                          
Age: 13 (Middle School, Class 7C) 
                          
Nice and the fact that you made him in the C class and not A is very interesting.
                          
Gender: Male 
                          
Nice
                          
Birthday: 03/2 
                          
Nice
                          
Height: 5"2 
                          
Great height
                          
School: Shogakko Elementary (shogakko literally means elementary school lmao)
                          
So it's elementary's Elementary school? I laughed hard when I read and reviewed this.
                          
Appearance: Dark brown hair with pale-ish skin. Shichirou has dark blue eyes and bed hair, accompanied with a lean figure and large feet. Out of school, he normally wears a simple t-shirt with baggy sweats or something along the lines. He has a small scar on his eyebrow. His school uniform is just a plain long-sleeved black button un (that he usually keeps unbuttoned to an extent) and black dress pants. He wears white shoes with blue details. 
                          
Nice and I like how you gave me what he wears outside of school. Plus the little details like his scar is really appreciated. This is awesome.
                          
Personality: Shichirou is very quiet and closed off from the world. He can be very aggressive and doesn't trust easily because of harsh bullying in his old home back in Tokyo (living in Hiroshima now). He has a reputation as a delinquent, even though he hasn't done anything particularly bad. He takes joy in annoying others with half-assed answers that he doesn't put much thought into. In high-school, he'll be a lot less shy and much more mellowed out, still with the same roots of his old persona.
                          
This is awesome and his personality is great. He is so different from others and has a vibe to him that just draws me to read his story. I also love how his past experiences shaped his quietness and how he soon got over it years later. This is amazing.
                          
Hero name: Not actually trying to be a hero, but if he had to choose one, it would probably be "Hawk-eyes", because he's very blunt. 
                          
That's actually a nice hero name, especially if it goes with his quirk.
                          
Quirk: (I WAS LOOKING FORWaRD TO THIS PART <3) Shichirou's quirk is hawk-eyes. When in use, he basically use a zoom factor which allows him to zoom his vision around 20 feet. It takes quite a toll on his eyes, making them dry and if he's not careful he'll need glasses. If he uses it for long periods of time, he might not be able to see for long periods of time (days, maybe weeks). His eyes turn yellow when he's using his ability. 
                          
This is a awesome quirk and it's something different and not overpowered like other quirks. It's awesome and fits him perfectly. 
                          
Quirk adaptation: When he was three, he was almost kidnapped by a minor villain with a flying quirk. While off the ground, he eyes suddenly zoomed in on the people below. For the next few days, whenever he squinted, he would activate his quirk and they'd have to pour cold water on his eyes in order to turn it off. He got used to controlling it by closing his eyes whenever he felt the need to squint, and eventually he stopped squinting unintentionally.
                          
This is awesome, the way he developed his quirk and the side effects when he started is great. Not to mention the solution of cold water on his eyes to turn it off was also really good.
                          
Past: His parents originally met in Kyoto when his father was in the army. They moved to america (where Shichirou was born) until Shichirou was three, before moving to tokyo and staying there until he was in sixth grade. He got bullied to the point of having to move schools, before they had to move to Hiroshima. He's been there since, and wants to become a police officer when he's older. 
                          
This is awesome and his motivation of becoming a police officer in the future is great. It's a perfect job for someone of his quirk too. 
                          
Other: It's been 20 years since pro hero Deku became No. 1 Hero. The population of the quirkless went from 20% to 8%. His mother is quirkless, and his father is like Tokoyami as in he has very bird-like features. 
                          
Nice, this is great and is a very great guess to what could happen 20 years in the future. The fact that his father is also bird like justifies his quirk better and gives a idea of not only where he got his hero name if he wanted one but the bluntness if it.
                          
More?: Nope. I'm done.
                          
Ok, thanks
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Final Analysis- This OC is amazing and is a great start to my my hero academia OC reviews. This OC is different and has a great idea of the future. He has flaws and the way his quirk came to him in the first place is awesome. I can't believe how well he is put together for not being a hero but a police officer. This OC is really good and I'm glad he was my first mha OC review. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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